Let's pretend you're writing a ToyDust fan-fiction. Because let's be honest. Who wouldn't want to write a fan-fic about me? (insert sarcasm) And let's further pretend you had written something like: "ToyDust walked excitedly out of Dallas Vintage Toys, thrilled with his purchase." Is there anything wrong with the way this is written? It's a … Continue reading Strong Verbs
